blog 13 The Reading Experience

 When I went to combine the three sections, it all seemed to just come together. In a few places I did need to add a sentence or two to keep a flow between the paragraphs. But all in all, it did not take too much effort. Also it was exciting to see them all together. Which may sound weird, but there was a sigh of relief, something that I have been working on and putting so much time into to just match up. I realize that each section does need more work, adding more everywhere. For example in the lit review I need to state more sources and expand on the ones I have. The info that is already there is great, but it needs more. The section that needs the most work is the methodology, because it’s very dry. By adding more about my participants and details about where the house is the section will start to come together. I think that once I go and get the interviews and start the analysis and discussion sections it will help me to go back to the sections that are complete and really get this paper going in the direction that it needs to be.